Sublevel's stories and artwork

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Sublevel 113
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Re: Sublevel's stories and artwork

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OK, while I translate my little stories, I want to ask a simple question: do you understand me? :D
I mean my translation to English, because I know that I speak English very terribly, and sometimes I use Google translate to post here, in the Forum.
Now I want to translate my text without any mistake, but idk how my Engrish text looks to you...

My previous story, for example. Do you understand it?
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I don't have any problems. My English is terrible too.
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I understand your texts very well, but I noticed you hardly ever use the articles ("a", "the"). Is that because there are no articles in Russian?
Also I noticed a few issues with tenses, but apart from that your English looks fine for me. Though I'm not an expert in that either, and I probably make much more mistakes than you, so it'll be good to hear the opinion of other people too.
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I understand your text with ease too. In fact, I'd say your story is one of the most eloquent things I've seen from you. The problems that you have seem to mostly be either of word choice or word order: not that bad. Just please, promise me: don't believe Google translator.
"We didn't leave the Stone Age, because we ran out of stones."
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Thank you for your responds, guys. :)
Is that because there are no articles in Russian?
Yep. And I love it! :D
please, promise me: don't believe Google translator.
Lol, I promise. XD
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Did you throw off your forum game project?
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I forgot to say you: why I don't post my little stories? Because my netbook's files were destroyed. (It happened two months ago) :P
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o_O

wow, I'm sorry about that...
...and I'm mad about that too, because I won't see them XD
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My oldforum shit. :)

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The story about how three Submachine addicts missed New Year celebration because of Submachine 8 release date:

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What if Murtaugh's karma arm was visible?.. :

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(^not mine)


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random submachine fan pics:

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Funny
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