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Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 11 May 2014 22:28
by ENIHCAMBUS
Put batteries in the flashlight, hope it isn't dead now.
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 12 May 2014 15:57
by Sublevel 114
ThunderDasher wrote:Whistle, so that the echo tells you how huge is the room.
Mr. Stick thinks there is better way to examine the room...
bender wrote:put batteries in the torch duh
ThunderDasher wrote:tuck those batteries in the flashlight... duh.
ENIHCAMBUS wrote:Put batteries in the flashlight, hope it isn't dead now.
...Yeah, like flashlight.
He puts both batteries back in flashlight...
OnyxIonVortex wrote:Turn it on after and explore the surroundings.
...and turns it on.
That's better. Flashlight is almost dead, but now Mr. Stick can see through darkness. He don't know how much time flashlight would keep working... But he hopes for better.
He can see familiar hatch above. He also again notices the same holes on walls above. And it seems it wasn't coincidence when he crossed those holes with his body the hatch has been immediately closed...
He made step, and something rustled under his feet. And the sound is different from sound of soil ground...
Oh, it appeared it is just OFFENSIVE NOTE he dropped down earlier...
Wait! What are these big holes to the left and to the right from him?
They look like passages...
Mr. Stick wonders where do they lead?
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 12 May 2014 16:56
by ENIHCAMBUS
Check right one first.
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 12 May 2014 19:55
by Vortex
Take a peek before entering.
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 16 May 2014 17:35
by Sublevel 114
< Sorry for delaying. Let's continue! >
ENIHCAMBUS wrote:Check right one first.
OnyxIonVortex wrote:Take a peek before entering.
Mr. Stick takes a peek before entering the right passage - it seems there is another room there...
He didn't noticed anything strange, so he moves into passage, and soon he can see the room.
There's still soil ground under his feet everywhere. And far side of room is more far than in all previous rooms.
AUTHOR'S QUESTION
I am thinking about adding secrets to the story... that give some bonus content.
What do you think?
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 16 May 2014 18:05
by ENIHCAMBUS
What is that thing?
@Author's question: Yeah! Why not?

Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 16 May 2014 18:10
by bender
@ Author's question: Yes add secret watermelons!
Only thing Submachine doesn't have!
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 16 May 2014 19:02
by Sublevel 114
ENIHCAMBUS wrote:What is that thing?
< What is "that thing"?
:P
Please, tell mr. Stick specific command
>
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 16 May 2014 19:28
by Vortex
Command: look at that black thing illuminated by the flashlight.
Sublevel 102 wrote:AUTHOR'S QUESTION
I am thinking about adding secrets to the story... that give some bonus content.
What do you think?
I was also thinking the same when doing my story... that I could add some secret content to satisfy more skilled players. But the main problem is, what do you do if people completely miss the secrets? anyways I added a secret in the "BEAST" title screen as an experiment to see if people would notice, but noone did so far (well you did but because I told you XD), and that helped me finally decide against.
in my story I don't think they would work because the characters won't normally revisit old locations, and soon they will start to have somewhat complex layout. But in your story I think they could work, and as added benefit if we know there may be secrets beforehand we will pay more attention to everything.
Re: mr. Stick adventure! chapter 3
Posted: 16 May 2014 21:26
by Sublevel 114
OnyxIonVortex wrote:Command: look at that black thing illuminated by the flashlight.
Mr. Stick fully enters the room. He starts to examine it. He goes inspect near side of room first (near to the fourth wall).
Strange device stands in the way of flashlight's beam. It stands on three legs, dug in the ground. Device has hole on one side, it seems something should be inserted here... maybe...
No, Mr. Stick can't say right now what is this device for.
wait... He can see something behind it... What...
Is it
abyss???