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Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 04 Jul 2013 16:38
by ENIHCAMBUS
Rooster5man wrote:Back on PastelForum, my signature was something along the lines of "Royal SubNet Cartographer"...I was having fun with signatures.

Anyway, I'll be a Scientist, I guess.
I'm still not added the info to the characters.
OnyxIonVortex wrote:
The Abacus wrote:ENIHCAMUS
:twisted:
Image
The Kakama wrote:Here, perhaps? ;)
That shows the elements, but not the powers. :P

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 04 Jul 2013 17:26
by Sublevel 113
Me want karma powers!!!

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 04 Jul 2013 17:40
by The Abacus
OnyxIonVortex wrote:What kind of superpowers will we have?

EDIT:
The Abacus wrote:ENIHCAMUS
:twisted:
typo

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 08 Jul 2013 00:18
by Rooster5man
So you have to add info to our characters? :P

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 08 Jul 2013 00:48
by ENIHCAMBUS
Rooster5man wrote:So you have to add info to our characters? :P
I planed 3 ways, but I don't know what one to use:

1) Simple list with main info.
2) Detailed info, 20 characters per post.
3) Character cover letters in WINRAR file.

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 10 Jul 2013 04:47
by ENIHCAMBUS
Added 5 more characters to the story: Ultrassil, Taka, Neurostatictoxin, Rafael, and of course, Programsub 23 (Subprogram 32 evil twin).

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 14 Jul 2013 08:55
by ENIHCAMBUS
Prologe:

Who I am?
Where I am?
What time is it?
What I'm doing?
What I did?
What I lost?
What I won?
When this nightmare will end?
When I will escape?
Why I don't want to escape?
What its happening?
Where is time?
What is time?
Who is me?
What is what?
Where is where?
What is memory?
I have memory?
I have mind?
I have soul?
I have myself?
Where is God?
Is my life going to back to its happy times?
Is my life there?
I have life?
I'm dead?

...I'm not sure of nothing. I lost all because I was walking in the wrong way. Mur taked my soul, my life for his plans and now i'm trapped on this endless network of Submachines. How blind I was, believing his lies. I always wondered what horrible things he did in the past...

...And now I know:

I've heard stories.

Well, not actually heard. I just read them on pieces of paper. I read that there were exploration teams. For the love of god, did he really form teams? what happened to those men and women? where their shattered bones lie right now?

I know that everywhere I look I'm probably looking at bones. The subnet is everywhere. How many people had to die for him to gather the information he so dearly needed?

Jesus.

I never joined any exploration team. I never saw anybody. I'm not much of an explorer. If you tell me to do something - I will. But I see no point in exploring the infinity. Maybe that's why he chose me for the defsys mission. Maybe that's the reason I'm standing on this ledge right now.

When I look around I see submachine.

When I look down I see nothing.

I want to be there.


GUARDIANS OF THE SUBMACHINE

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 14 Jul 2013 21:40
by The Abacus
ENIHCAMBUS wrote:I've heard stories.

Well, not actually heard. I just read them on pieces of paper. I read that there were exploration teams. For the love of god, did he really form teams? what happened to those men and women? where their shattered bones lie right now?

I know that everywhere I look I'm probably looking at bones. The subnet is everywhere. How many people had to die for him to gather the information he so dearly needed?

Jesus.

I never joined any exploration team. I never saw anybody. I'm not much of an explorer. If you tell me to do something - I will. But I see no point in exploring the infinity. Maybe that's why he chose me for the defsys mission. Maybe that's the reason I'm standing on this ledge right now.

When I look around I see submachine.

When I look down I see nothing.

I want to be there.
Oh, I rather like the idea of incorporating notes into the story. Looking forward to reading it :)

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 15 Jul 2013 04:57
by ENIHCAMBUS
Year [CENSORED]:

The Subgod Mateusz Skutnik decided to show himself and recluted 124 people to protect the Subnet, he gived to them superpowers and the had become the "Guardians of the Submachine". The reason that why Mateusz recluted these guardians is because the Subnet runs a great danger. The evil Skutul decided to declare the war. But not all of the Guardians decided to protect the Subnet, much of them began crazy with the power and decerted the Subgod, now the remain guardians go in a 7 dimensional travel of epicness in "GUARDIANS OF THE SUBMACHINE".

Meanwhile in the Winter Palace, Layer 1:

Death Road: *coughs*, when the Subgod will come?
SmartGuy: On a while, be patient please.

Mateusz Skutnik arrives.

Mateusz Skutnik: Dear Subguardians, I come to say the things can't be worst, Skutul is coming and much of us, deserted us.
Rednoob: Thei camo froom US?
Mateusz Skutnik: Yeah, sure, take a sentense out of context, that always gives good results.
Vortex: XD
Mateusz Skutnik: Any info about the deserters?
Sub-program 32: Well, I only know that the Doctor NotSoNice whas doing evil experiments with JackO and Vurn.
Sublevel: And evil twins are planing evil stuff.
Roosterman: Thats kinda obvious. ¬¬
Vortex: XD
Mateusz Skutnik: And?
Robobrain: I don't want to make trouble, but there is also a trouble in the Layer 6. A war is going to happen.
RomaH: A war?
Robobrain: Yes.
SmartGuy: Explain please.
Robobrain: There is a war between the Wayward army, leadered by Raxas; the Iron Will Empire, leadered by Alamos; the Jurasic Kingdom, leadered by Chaos; and the Topball Clan, leadered by Boingo.
World is Quiet (Quietly): That will be hard to take off.
Robobrain: Good thing we have informants.
Paranormal: What informants?
Robobrain: Berty and Alex. ENIHCAMBUS is also scaning their weakness.
ENIHCAMBUS: But i'm just right here!
Mateusz Skutnik: *Facepalm*
Abacus: Achievement Unlocked!
Sublevel: LOL
Vortex: XD
Death Road: Its not time for jokes.
Mateusz Skutink: Right.
Bender: In Pastel Land, people make jokes.
Roosterman: That will not protect you Bendy, Pastel Land is on Layer 3, We are now in Layer 1.
Bender: And?
SmartGuy: Stop, please!
Robobrain: ...Well, Subhunter is protecting Alex and Berty. And if something went wrong, Gil can summon a LAZOR.
Mateusz Skutnik: I don't think its a good idea, the LAZOR may likely shatter the structure of the sixth layer. Why need to plan this more clearly. Why cannot solve every problem at the same time, why need to plan a strategy. One thing is clear, Skutul is the last challange, and to take it off, we need to have all the Guardians in our side.
Death Road: How?
Robobrain: I'm not sure.
Abacus: I forgot to say, Kakama and RapidRacoon are in a race on the endless corridor.
Sublevel: Holy Sh*t!!!
Mateusz Skutnik: *Facepalm*
ENIHCAMBUS: Is there a way to have them back?
RomaH: Give me a hint please!
Mateusz Skutnik: The actual corridor has 32 bits, this means that go from (-4294967295;0) to (4294967295;0), when they reach an extreme the corridor loops.
Abacus: Don't worry, they already know that, they will take just 32 laps. Thats about 32 years for them.
Mateusz Skutnik: WTF o_0, I made them so fast.
Vortex: XD
Mateusz Skutnik: Well, continue gattering info, please come back in 24 hours to continue talking.
All: OK.

And every one outsides the Winter Palace.

To be continued...

Re: Guardians of the Submachine.

Posted: 15 Jul 2013 05:02
by Boingo
(Leader of top ball. Oh, goody. )