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Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 23 Aug 2017 12:51
by Sublevel 113
Vortex wrote:
Sublevel 105 wrote:so much you don't even know
no... don't worry, my friend. I understand you VERY much. :)

Good luck with completing this story! I will follow it with huge fun!

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 23 Aug 2017 12:54
by Vortex
Thanks!

I don't know why I always decide to update it precisely when I should be doing something else, and not when I have free time. My procrastination knows no limits DX

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 30 Aug 2017 12:33
by LittleTornado
just running through some thought here about the story.

We don't know much about M, except for these things:
1:He had at least one battery.
2:He was one or more floors below the balcony(to get the torch).
3:He can breathe the fog.

He is probably human(why'd he want a light if he wasn't?) and probably doesn't have the fog vision thing(though he might just need the torch for self-defense).

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 30 Aug 2017 12:45
by Vortex
LittleTornado wrote:just running through some thought here about the story.

We don't know much about M, except for these things:
1:He had at least one battery.
2:He was one or more floors below the balcony(to get the torch).
3:He can breathe the fog.

He is probably human(why'd he want a light if he wasn't?) and probably doesn't have the fog vision thing(though he might just need the torch for self-defense).
all good thoughts, but be careful, you appear to have made an unjustified assumption inadvertently.
(not gonna tell what it is, because you guys are too damn smart XD)

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 17 Sep 2017 14:28
by LittleTornado
the only assumptions I seem to have made are "can breathe fog" and "Human".

I say "can breathe fog" on the grounds of he got Ian's torch(which must have fallen off the balcony). If the torch fell and the entire outside is exposed to fog then he must be able to breathe, somehow.

The probably human bit comes from the fact that he used the worch at all. If he is a shadow a torch sounds like a bad idea, one wrong move and thigs become inconvenient.

Theres probably somethng else I'm missing here...

Corection: based ont he sumber of times I've said 'He' you can tell I've forgotten that equal oportunity shady helper characters area a thing. M may be a she.

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 15 Apr 2020 00:28
by Sublevel 113
So glad to see story continues!
:D

And this atmosphere of eternal darkness...
I'm translating one favorite horrror story right now, where everything fell into the darkness too, and there's something inside it... :?

Finishing rereading. Soon I will post command.

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 15 Apr 2020 20:39
by Vortex
Sublevel 109 wrote:I'm translating one favorite horrror story right now, where everything fell into the darkness too, and there's something inside it... :?
Interesting, which story?
Sublevel 109 wrote:Finishing rereading. Soo I will post command.
Looking forward to it!

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 16 Apr 2020 01:57
by Sublevel 113
Vortex wrote:Interesting, which story?
One osom MLP fanfiction. :mrgreen:
interested to read it alone at night?

hmm, it appears my laptop screen is darker than PC's, and I could not see or read some hings in the dark in chapters (like ceiling writing or remains of posters on walls). It's my personal problem though, because I rememebr I could see them easily in PC screen, I will work with images brightness with program just in case if I miss something with my eye.

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 16 Apr 2020 10:36
by Vortex
Sublevel 109 wrote:
Vortex wrote:Interesting, which story?
One osom MLP fanfiction. :mrgreen:
interested to read it alone at night?
MLP=my little pony? I though you hated them XD
Sublevel 109 wrote:hmm, it appears my laptop screen is darker than PC's, and I could not see or read some hings in the dark in chapters (like ceiling writing or remains of posters on walls). It's my personal problem though, because I rememebr I could see them easily in PC screen, I will work with images brightness with program just in case if I miss something with my eye.
That could be partly my fault. I tried to make the lighting more "realistic" given the light sources they have at any moment, but of course that comes at the expense of visibility. Would you rather prefer brighter images and more unrealistic lighting?

Re: BEAST forum story - discussion thread

Posted: 16 Apr 2020 12:34
by Sublevel 113
I thought you would say that. XD
You meant my reaction when Subgod added MLP location? :mrgreen:
Well, I hated not actual show, because I didn't watch it at that time, I hated it "spamming", because they were everywhere, in any type of pages Internet was returning to me.
I guess if I met me - old myself, crazy subfan who posted "SUBMACHINE!" literally everywhere in internet and in real life, I would hate myself. :mrgreen:
Now I like couple fanfictions more than actual show. :P Including this one. And not only about this fandom!

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No, I prefer realistic images - when our human eye can't see in the dark very good. :D
So, darkness is better.