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Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 17:35
by mentalEngineer
Hey so I've been wanting to make a comic type thing for a bit, but the main thing is that I can't really draw outside of pixel art, but I've decided to go ahead anyway so I hope you enjoy and excuse the quality.
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Child

You wake up and remember nothing, typical. Well... you have to do something... so what will you do?
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Arrows indicate places to go.

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 18:00
by Sublevel 113
Finally? New story! ^^
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(What's in left-top corner?)

Command:
- Are you male/female?
- Pick up ID card?

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 18:11
by Vortex
Command: Explore the surroundings, try not to fall.

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 18:15
by bender
I can't see the image

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 18:19
by Vortex
bender wrote:I can't see the image
<try CTRL+F5.
Or I read month ago that imgur is banned in Turkey, that could be the reason?>

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 18:24
by bender
that is it.. but I've found a way around it.

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 15 Jan 2016 23:56
by mentalEngineer
In your head;
What do I remember?
=I'm something.
=I'm 400 something zares old.
=I have the general structure of a Male Human.
=I don't know much about myself. :(
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Well, first things first, you look at your surroundings. (This is where the bad drawing comes into play.)
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After pulling that 360 degree spin, you go through what you saw; an energy balcony with some ladders, some black matter encompassing the wall behind you, and some blocks. It also seems half the wall is burn with what looks to be an abyss behind it. You don't wanna go there. Yet peculiarly there are some chunks of wall floating around where you are standing.
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You notice a card on the floorboards.
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Whoever scratched out Jeromey's face did it quickly, they didn't even stay in the lines.

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 16 Jan 2016 18:00
by Sublevel 113
command:
pick up small item in screen 3/16 (black pixel is in top line, third position)
go through the door?

Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 18 Jan 2016 23:36
by mentalEngineer
There was an object on the ground near the black matter, you pick it up.
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It's a nail. SCORE!
You then go to open the door.
It creaks open inward to reveal a dark room. Ominous.
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Re: Child - Black & White Adventure Panel Story

Posted: 18 Jan 2016 23:45
by Sublevel 113
scary...

carefully go in...
no NO NO! O_O

climb upstairs first.