Sundex wrote:Introduction:
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Sundex wrote:These are speculated to be on different layers. For this to be dubbed true, blue karma portals would need to be able to let people layer shift. Therefore, blue karma portals are capable of layer changing.
No, this is not how a proof works. You're saying that the two basements
might be on different layers. The second part might be true out of necessity, but you're basically forcing a conclusion that can't be drawn. You're saying it's true to force the conclusion that the basements are two different layers of each other.
Sundex wrote:Stability
This paragraph is mostly just a detailed summary; you're not making any explicit statements that can't be directly observed.
Sundex wrote:“Death”:
Same deal here.
Sundex wrote:Green Karma Portals [...] It has been speculated that these karma portal are capable of letting players shift layers. Personally, this is correct
...what? Did you mean to say "personally I think this is correct"?
Sundex wrote:but hasn’t been confirmed as there isn’t concrete evidence for it. However, there is some evidence that goes for this:
These two phrases contradict each other.
Sundex wrote:the big green karma portal in Submachine 7. This was meant to take us to the knot and shift us over to layer 5 for Submachine 9
Was it?
Sundex wrote:Stability:
These were thought to be more stable than blue karma portals.
By who?
Sundex wrote: [...] This means that, unless contained via brass, green portals are generally unstable.
I don't think you can really draw this conclusion or the opposite, because we've seen only two examples of green KPs outside of a stand. It's sort of rocky even as a general statement.
Sundex wrote:“Death”
Green karma portals can’t die. When they are contained, this is obviously true.
Do you have proof of this? How do you know that portals can't die of they are in a stand?
Sundex wrote:However, even when they are not contained, there have been no signs of dead karma portals that were originally green. Therefore, green karma portals cannot die.
This is another hasty generalization.
So I won't bother with the summary for the first part. I would also recommend if you want this treated as two theories, write them as two theories maybe over two posts.
Sundex wrote:Part 2 (The Properties of Wisdom Gems): Rough Draft
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During the invasion, the contributors continued their research on karma. At the sight of their research, we find an wisdom/energy gem locked in a box. The fact that they were using this gem for their research means that wisdom gems are made from karmic energy.
...am I missing something here? How do you know that they were continuing research on karma during the invasion? And how do you know the gem was involved?
Sundex wrote:Wisdom Gem Properties:
Color:
[...]There is one main color of wisdom gems that is seen within the Subnet: blue. Therefore, it is better to describe wisdom gems have or don’t have color.
I think any discrepancies between the appearances of wisdom gems in the main series is just a results of changing artistic touches by Mat, and not really anything more subtle.
Self-sustaining properties:
Sundex wrote:Similarly to the Subnet’s karmic veins that self-sustain the generator described in a not in Submachine 10
Where were the veins described as "self-sustaining"? Unless you're talking about generator, but then that means the generator isn't "self-sustaining" if it needs the veins in the first place. Where is this term coming from?
Sundex wrote:They can replenish a set amount of energy in a certain amount of time.
Is there actually any proof anywhere that the gems are being "depleted" and then "replenishhing themselves"? Besides
Sundex wrote:and by the time we revisit the mover in Submachine 9, the three wisdom gems have a heightened sense of opacity and radiancy.
which I chalked up to an artistic change? (For proof that Mat does do this, I asked him during a livestream if there was any difference between the design of the karma portal between Sub7 and Sub10, and he answered that it was just cosmetic).
Sundex wrote:Transparency:
Sundex wrote:Radiance:
Sorry.
Sundex wrote:A wisdom gem can either levitate or be affected by gravity. When a wisdom gem levitates, it shows that it was recently manifested by the Subnet. When it is affected by gravity, it shows that its age is moreso compared to a recently created one. Many wisdom gems within the Subnet are “old”, such as the citric acid wisdom gem and the ancient section wisdom gem from Submachine 5, and the invasion wisdom gem from Submachine 7. The only wisdom gem that is seen being “premature” is the first one we see within the main series at Submachine 1.
Where is your proof that there's an inverse relationship between age and levitation? You just tied the two together without proof and I also have no idea how you're going around attaching "ages" to certain gems.
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No need for me to look at the last two summary paragraphs.