Jatsko's fanfics (discussion)

[Jatsko]

Thanks!

[Jatsko]

Alright, I know some of you (NOT TO BE OBVIOUS BUT SUBLEVEL IS INCLUDED IN THIS GROUP XD ) would like to see me write a fanfic or two....or three...ehhhh

So, to tide whoever ye may be until Submachine: The Whatever (The Needle? The Forbidden Ground? Both possible titles) starts work, I've planned a series of fan-made Submachine notes, written both in conventional style (character exchange) and in Sub9 tablet style (:D). I started writing them to relate to my Project Karma, which I started to relate to Murtaugh's rebuilding of the Subnet, yada yada yada. But they're slightly modified to get rid of any mention of Project Karma. However the first three I will still keep as Project Karma purposes

(If you don't know or care what Project Karma is, well, sorry for making you read that XD)

ANYWAY, there will be a total of 32 notes that will kinda set the stage for the next two fanfics (again, "Needle" and "Forbidden Ground"). They will be in a thread known as "Submachine: Hypna" and they will describe various...instances...that happen (both with canon characters and without) around the Subnet. These will later be tied directly into the actual fanfics.

Let's cut the rambling; check out the thread, come back, and tell me what you think! I'll try adding transcripts whenever I can until I reach that magic number 32

[Sublevel 114]

that 32...
гг
it hunts me everywhere...

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One thing, Jatsko. I will read you fanfics ONLY after you finish it.
I saw enough abandoned projects, so if I want to enter fully into your story, descend into atmosphere, I should be sure it's finished.

Don't repeat my mistakes (my poor stories... T-T)

Can't wait!!!

[Jatsko]

Fair enough, that gives me more incentive

Guys, if you have feedback to give, let me hear it; it will help a lot!

[Jatsko]

Two new transcripts!

As you'll see, the characters have very different perspectives and mindsets. Decided to have a little fun and get more experimental with these two.

[Jatsko]

Two new transcripts!

And again, I appreciate feedback. It helps a lot!

[ENIHCAMBUS]

Its looking pretty good, I absolutely like the format.

Plus you got more than 1/4 of the way.

[Jatsko]

A couple more transcripts, plus a SPECIAL one that will act as the official intro to "Submachine: The Forbidden Ground". Let me know what you think! Feedback is still welcome

[Jatsko]

I'm very interested in the fact that I copied and pasted part of the script for "Dumb and Dumber" into the HYPNA thread and no one seemed to notice! (But the thread was still gathering views...)

Like I said, feedback is great, y'all. I know you are reading the transcripts (or at least clicking on the thread to clear your field of unread topics). And I want to know if there's anything I can improve, since HYPNA is the beginning stage for two fanfics that I'm making for the community, and those will be full-fledged stories. With meaning, etc.

I also understand that the transcripts are very disjointed - they are supposed to be like that, and it's made intentionally hard to piece together.

So, yeah. Maybe for the next transcript I'll copy/paste 50 Shades of Grey or something like that (but don't tell anyone!)

[Sublevel 114]

So, yeah. Maybe for the next transcript I'll copy/paste 50 Shades of Grey or something like that

*takes scissors*

sorry, can't leave feedback until you post all notes. :P