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Also, when someone in a comic strip has the first speaking and is located at the right. Its speech bubble is always located in the higgest position posible.

Sublevel 104 wrote:try up-down system?

highest bubble -> lowest bubble

That's depend on where the characters are placed. If the character is on the most right part of strip, but have the highest speech bubble, then it would be confusing.

- ak - wrote:If the character is on the most right part of strip, but have the highest speech bubble, then it would be confusing.

well, you're right

classic format is ok

Sublevel 104 wrote:

- ak - wrote:If the character is on the most right part of strip, but have the highest speech bubble, then it would be confusing.

well, you're right

classic format is ok

It's up to Gemini on how he wants to use it. His method is fine to me so far.

top left, top right, top up, top down

top left, top right, bottom left, bottom right

try up-down system?

highest bubble -> lowest bubble

I'm sticking the read left to right format. If there are two text bubbles, read the left one then the right one. If there is only one. If there are three characters, with 1-2 text bubbles, left middle right.

Making bubbles up and down is an idea but I worry about blocking out important parts of locations in the game, guess I could edit and move them around. The story is more about environment, then the texts the characters provide (isobel and mateusz provide more, Soullock will provide some since he was there before the uprising began)

The other characters have their theories, but they have no clue what they are in and why the people responsible are doing what they are doing.

At this point I'm not sure I'm going to release the second part of Chapter 2 yet. Its not finished, I have just started work on the beginning part with Soullock's introduction. I just want to wait for a bit is all...

Some things to note-

Characters from this point on will not be introduced before the comic, they will be introduced during the comic, since they are spoilery. Soullock for example... I've already said enough about the uprising...

So far there are a total of six chapters. But more could be added on depending on who wants to be added, and also how well received Chapter 2 is... I have to admit, its going to be a bit dark.

The comic is rated PG-13 (ain't no teletubby shit going on in here!)

Submachine wont be the only locations visited, I do want to incorporate Covert Front as flash back sequences. Still working on that... might even include Fog Fall too.

The comic is indeed a story, however I will retain the comedy elements, the memes, references to this community, and things like that. There are plenty more humorous moments on the way

Cool.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

If you want Gemini, I can take some comic format photos and link the images here.

As requested, the Pastel Land Comic has been split into two threads: one containing only his comics and this one containing only the discussions.

You're welcomed

Thank you Soullock.