Crescent Moons - a YouTube story

[Prupp]

- a story that may or may not be based in the Submachine universe.
Have I decided? Maybe. Don't worry, I'll ask Mateusz first.

https://youtu.be/CH9u4N6wVis

https://youtu.be/CH9u4N6wVis

Hey Submafia!
So this is something I've thought on for a while now.
And due to its connotations, I'll post it here first.

If you have nothing to do in between streams, it would be cool if you took a look at it, tell me what you think? It's the first of a kind for me, and it's more of a project for myself as well, but won't hurt if others enjoy it as well.

Peace out - and no spooning in the comments.

[Sublevel 114]

will check it when I have free time

But what is it? Some kind of text story but on Youtube? Or some online play? Or something else?

[Prupp]

Awesome, thanks!

It's a text based story plus a soundtrack. So basically a novel with embedded music :3

[Vortex]

I liked it!

But two things:

-It's maybe a bit too long, I found it hard to keep track of the story at some point.

-The font looks weird, some letters like "t" or "f" are missing parts XD that could be another factor that made the story hard to follow for me.

But overall I liked it, especially the music

[Prupp]

Oh that's great, thanks for the feedback!!

Do you think it would help if the episodes were half as long? Maybe shorter?

Yeah, the font is based upon my own writing. It's supposed to only be one continuous line for every letter as a sort of symbolism, but it may require getting used to it. And maybe a lot of it.

I mainly make music as creative output, but have wanted to make soundtrack for so long. I thought maybe making a story could help me develop creatively.

Again, really appreciate your comments, will think about them till next time.

[Vortex]

Oh that's great, thanks for the feedback!!

Do you think it would help if the episodes were half as long? Maybe shorter?

Yeah, I think shorter episodes (like 5 or 6 min each for example) would work better in this case, also you could update more frequently that way

Yeah, the font is based upon my own writing. It's supposed to only be one continuous line for every letter as a sort of symbolism, but it may require getting used to it. And maybe a lot of it.

Yeah, I figured out that the font's meant to have one stroke per letter. The most conflicting letter migt be the "t", that can easily be confused with an "l". Maybe you can write the entire "t" as one stroke, like a backwards 4 or something, I don't know if that would work.

I mainly make music as creative output, but have wanted to make soundtrack for so long. I thought maybe making a story could help me develop creatively.

Again, really appreciate your comments, will think about them till next time.

Thanks! Looking forward to the next one

[The Kakama]

Looks interesting, maybe I'll check it out.

[Prupp]

Cool!

[Prupp]

https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=P ... BVm1gdZzh3
Here is ep 2!

This here will be the official playlist for all the episodes. Hope you like 'em! And won't be spamming here anymore, this can be a discussion thread for those who like, instead feel free to subscribe to get updates!
Will post a new episode every Thursday at 6PM CEST, at latest.

@Vortex
I took your advice and changed the "t", thanks, looks much better now!
But I still felt 11-14 min is the optimum for dramaturgic effect, so it doesn't become stale or interrupted. I'll be posting stuff on my SoundCloud between CM, so something happens between them. Maybe on YT too.

Yours sincerely,
Prupp/Yombai

[Sublevel 114]

More episodes?
In this case, I will resten this story when it will be fully finished.