Pastel Land Comic Discussion

[Paranormal]

WTF? Really!? xD

Ahh, nothing like giving Mur the full moon!

[ENIHCAMBUS]

[The Kakama]

Wonder when will they visit his grave.

[Anonymous2]

But I have small request, Gem. Can my character become alone for some period of time, and play small to-survive hide-and-seek with deadly subbot? Oo

Maybe.

WTF? Really!? xD

Knowing you in person, I can totally see you doing that to someone lol.

Wonder when will they visit his grave

Dunno. If I can think of a way to add it in, maybe. Those tombs really don't have a part of the story at the moment.

[Sublevel 114]

Also, Anonymous, in each picture I don't understand which bubble I should read first.
top left, top right, top up, top down... and this order always changes! why?

[WorldisQuiet5256]

I do love the work as well.
But a bit of advice who reads allot of Graphic Novels, the order is top left, top right, bottom left, bottom right. Moreover, try to have the bubble point closer to the character.

I'm not criticizing you.
I love the work, "What can be seen, can't be unseen."

[ENIHCAMBUS]

Yeah, I also have problem finding out what bubble should I read first.

[Anonymous2]

Lol you're not the only ones, its confusing too. I think I'll end up making it a left to right format, so the characters who have starting lines will start out on the left. Guess I'll need to put cameras on the left for Paranormal and his big booty moon-fest.

In terms of text bubbles... they are mostly easy to read and are close enough to their corresponding character. But I'll change their text to read left to right, so for characters who have two speech bubbles, read left first then right. No character will have more than two bubbles. Two is the max. So no worries on there being a bazillion bubbles for one character.

[Jatsko]

I feel that reading right to left would be really confusing, as we naturally read left to right, but idk.

[Sublevel 114]

try up-down system?

highest bubble -> lowest bubble